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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 11:46 pm

I thought so...
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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 11:47 pm

EXCITING POST!!!
sunny sunny sunny sunny sunny sunny king king king
elephant elephant elephant elephant elephant elephant
geek geek geek geek geek geek jocolor jocolor jocolor jocolor
Basketball Basketball Basketball Basketball Basketball Basketball Basketball Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 11:50 pm

wow!! Very exciting...

Not as exciting as this though










oops am I supposed to be writing about serious things like film scripts....

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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Sat Sep 26, 2009 12:00 am

Ackk! Over excited!!....I mean, *yawn* so boring! Sleep Sleep Sleep Sleep Sleep Sleep Sleep

Very Happy Smile Sad Surprised Shocked Cool Laughing Mad Razz Embarassed Crying or Very sad Evil or Very Mad Twisted Evil Rolling Eyes Wink Exclamation Question Idea Arrow Neutral What a Face Like a Star @ heaven Suspect I love you No @ cyclops clown pirat tongue silent pale alien cat monkey pig rabbit bounce confused affraid Basketball cheers bom drunken Sleep sunny albino cherry santa rendeer farao king queen jocolor geek scratch study elephant flower afro lol! afro flower elephant study scratch geek jocolor queen king farao rendeer santa cherry albino sunny Sleep drunken bom cheers Basketball affraid confused bounce rabbit pig monkey cat alien pale silent tongue pirat clown cyclops @ No I love you Suspect Like a Star @ heaven What a Face Neutral Arrow Idea Question Exclamation Wink Rolling Eyes Twisted Evil Evil or Very Mad Crying or Very sad Embarassed Razz Mad Laughing Cool Shocked Surprised Sad Smile Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Sat Sep 26, 2009 12:01 am

woa...whoever next comes on here is in for a shock!!

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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Sat Sep 26, 2009 12:03 am

Wooooh! Yes they are!

190 posts! I've spent waaaayy too long on here!
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Sat Sep 26, 2009 1:33 pm

Anyway, any constructive critisim (or just plain critism if you like, it's all constructuve in my eyes) for that bit?

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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Sat Sep 26, 2009 2:55 pm

Any particular reason that he keeps talking to himself? (or perhaps someone else...) He seems to do a lot of it! Just an observation.
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:55 pm

lol they're talking to God!!! and the V.O. bits are memories

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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Sat Sep 26, 2009 8:32 pm

I gathered that!

Oh so the "Get out" is just a memory! Maybe you could include some footage or something there, even if it's vague, just to make it clearer?
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Thu Oct 01, 2009 12:30 pm

Any ideas for the title, my working title is 'The Church Bit'. I'm not overly fond of it though, I hoped it would grow on me but it didn't

Any ideas?

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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:19 pm

How about:

Outside.
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Oct 02, 2009 12:31 am

Might give away the ending a little? Good thought though

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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Fri Oct 02, 2009 10:20 am

I dunno whether it would. It would probably be irrelevant to the viewer until the end. Good point though.

Erm... "Troubled minds" (or "troubled hearts")?, "voices in the dark"?, "Mistakes"?, "Church."?

That's about all I can think of for now!
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:19 am

wow I thought this was bout a book????? u 2 have talked bout a loada Random stuff!!!!! just to say I think ur books doin gd so far, keep it up!!!!!!
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