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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:33 pm

I can imagine!!! Well done on surviving!! Not many would make it past page 1!

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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:34 pm

Let alone page 6!!!
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:35 pm

i think you guys have written more than i have ever written anywhere!
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:36 pm

it's an addiction...
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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:37 pm

pale Can't stop writing....must stop...
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:40 pm

No carry on, it is quite readable!
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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:41 pm

Lol we should compile it into a book!
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:42 pm

'Forum...the Dan and Naomi collection'

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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:43 pm

Foreword by "some sad person who had too much time on their hand"
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:45 pm

oh...that'd be me

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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:46 pm

What the sad bit too! (I hope this is still entertaining, Sarah!)
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:50 pm

naomi it looks absalutly fab so far!!!!! Very Happy
like amazing!!
dw im sure God is guiding you with writing this!!

oo let us haf a least a lil bit more i wana kno wot happens!!!

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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:50 pm

Love the sigature!
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:52 pm

yes gripped, looks like grace is too!
You should publish your book!
Andwrite a sequal
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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:53 pm

Further writings of bored church youth...
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:56 pm

lol!!!

That would at least be a book never written before...

Ok...should I 'publish' (I use that term loosely for this bit), a bit more of my script?

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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:57 pm

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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:59 pm

yes!
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:01 pm

OK... Dan, that long yes has mucked up the message input box :p


SCENE 2

INT. CHURCH SACTUARY.-DAY

ALEX peeps round the door, sees there's no one around and comes in

ALEX
Hello again (finds a seat)Still not quite sure what I'm supposed to do. If you really do exist, which I think you do, you already know everything. Everything that's happened to me, the hairs on my head, and all that. Now that's all very well but how well do you know me... you may have made me but, I mean, I made a light turn on at home, doesn't mean I know anything about it. I'm not doing very well am I? I guess I'll start with why I came in yesterday. Exams. Well, lack of them in my case. Everyone keeps telling me it was a waste blah blah blah, I could've done really well and all that. Well it's not my fault. There's a reason I didn't turn up, there's a reason I'm not there now. All those people in that hall...they haven't seen anything in their lives nearly like I saw in one evening. (the voices come back again)

ALEX (V.O.)
No, no this isn't happening...stop it!

VOICE 1 (V.O.)
Alex, listen to me. You have a chance. I have a chance. I'm not going to ignore that. I'm sorry Alex

ALEX (V.O.)
That doesn't make it ok

VOICE 1(V.O.)
Maybe not, but that won't change anything

VOICE 4 (V.O.)
Please. (screams)

ALEX(V.O.)
(screams) NOOOO!

VOICE 1(V.O)
(urgent...forceful)
Get out...go on get out NOW!

ALEX
(haunted by the memories) That's what people don't get. I don't deserve to sit my exams, I don't deserve to pass them and I certainly don't deserve to do well. (stops, sees a cross at the front of the church)Look, are you actually going to do anything, or are you just going to show off your flashy crosses. Fine. Have it your way (starts to leave) This is a waste of time.

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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:06 pm

Nice one! Getting interesting...

Oh and sorry! Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:12 pm

lol don't worry, I mind really

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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:13 pm

You mind really? Or don't mind really!
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:28 pm

oops, I missed out the very important word 'don't' there!!

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PostSubject: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:29 pm

lol
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PostSubject: Re: I'm writing something...   Fri Sep 25, 2009 11:44 pm

What an exciting post you sent there Dan...

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