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Danw
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Danw
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| | Subject: I'm writing something... Fri Sep 25, 2009 11:47 pm | |
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NaomiS
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| | Subject: Re: I'm writing something... Fri Sep 25, 2009 11:50 pm | |
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Danw
Posts : 243
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| | Subject: I'm writing something... Sat Sep 26, 2009 12:00 am | |
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NaomiS
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| | Subject: Re: I'm writing something... Sat Sep 26, 2009 12:01 am | |
| woa...whoever next comes on here is in for a shock!! | |
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Danw
Posts : 243
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Age : 30
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| | Subject: I'm writing something... Sat Sep 26, 2009 12:03 am | |
| Wooooh! Yes they are!
190 posts! I've spent waaaayy too long on here! | |
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NaomiS
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| | Subject: Re: I'm writing something... Sat Sep 26, 2009 1:33 pm | |
| Anyway, any constructive critisim (or just plain critism if you like, it's all constructuve in my eyes) for that bit? | |
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Danw
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Age : 30
Location : Eastleigh
| | Subject: I'm writing something... Sat Sep 26, 2009 2:55 pm | |
| Any particular reason that he keeps talking to himself? (or perhaps someone else...) He seems to do a lot of it! Just an observation. | |
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NaomiS
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Age : 33
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| | Subject: Re: I'm writing something... Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:55 pm | |
| lol they're talking to God!!! and the V.O. bits are memories  | |
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Danw
Posts : 243
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| | Subject: I'm writing something... Sat Sep 26, 2009 8:32 pm | |
| I gathered that!
Oh so the "Get out" is just a memory! Maybe you could include some footage or something there, even if it's vague, just to make it clearer? | |
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NaomiS
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Age : 33
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| | Subject: Re: I'm writing something... Thu Oct 01, 2009 12:30 pm | |
| Any ideas for the title, my working title is 'The Church Bit'. I'm not overly fond of it though, I hoped it would grow on me but it didn't
Any ideas? | |
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Danw
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| | Subject: I'm writing something... Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:19 pm | |
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NaomiS
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| | Subject: Re: I'm writing something... Fri Oct 02, 2009 12:31 am | |
| Might give away the ending a little? Good thought though | |
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Danw
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| | Subject: I'm writing something... Fri Oct 02, 2009 10:20 am | |
| I dunno whether it would. It would probably be irrelevant to the viewer until the end. Good point though.
Erm... "Troubled minds" (or "troubled hearts")?, "voices in the dark"?, "Mistakes"?, "Church."?
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david symington
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Age : 32
Location : My house
| | Subject: Re: I'm writing something... Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:19 am | |
| wow I thought this was bout a book????? u 2 have talked bout a loada Random stuff!!!!! just to say I think ur books doin gd so far, keep it up!!!!!! | |
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